Camp writing-portfolio

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

So today I almost died .Now I will tell you how.We went on this thing called The Giant Swing I went number 2 because I wanted to see how it felt when I was up there.When I got to the point Level 2 stopped the harness begain stranglying me my eyes waterd up then I hear 3 2 1 CLICK!!!! I fall towards the ground like a Kamikaze strike on a ship.when I got felt my legs shaking and Scaterying.The food the night before was Discusting but i are it because I was starving so I soved it down then seconds my friends at the table discribe me as a vacum cleaner.The bunk beds were horriable I would rather sleep on the floor.The first night we wore every we could because we didnt want to get bitten by anything and I think that this will end Journal entry 1.